Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 27, 2021
My Fantastic Food Spoilage Animation/Slide
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Fantastic work Tilly. I like that you have given credit to Freya for her hard work. I wonder what it would look like with a real banana.
ReplyDeleteHi Miss Smith yeah it would be so gross
DeleteHi Tilly LP here
ReplyDelete(your Toroa buddy) Anyway you did really good I love how you did show the bananas whole life rather than starting when it turned yellow. Next time watch out you missed some ? marks in there, But other than that it is great. It remineds me of my bananas at home none will eat them now that they have gone brown, yuck! Great job overall Tilly. I'll be back to comment on your next post. Kind Regards
-Lily-piper